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layout: post title: "NCE4-Lesson9仿写练习" date: 2014-11-27 21:19 comments: true

categories: 英语

前言

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总结

act as 比单纯的served as 更加表现出掩盖,装的性子

动名词的后置部分更加的简练,同时出现了diguised as minstrel来作修饰成分。

同时注意时态,这里都是在描述过去的事物。

passport通行证,凭证,用得非常简洁准确。

set out to penetrate the camp of sb 出发、动身、悄悄潜入。这么复杂地含义就这样简单的表述出来。

settled down for the winter at Chippenham 停下来准备过冬!经典的表述!

thither Alfred went. thither 向那里——》这里的倒装强调了,Alfred的方向一致出发性,表示了一起走的特点

be at slack ——》轻松的状态

依靠劫掠生活的表达

重视这种精炼的短句表达

复杂的长句——》但是结构很清晰,转折特别是提示逻辑推理方向和结论的重点词汇。

did not risk sth 用动词表达来代替instead of 这样的介词词组表达

经典总结句——这是历史的史诗!

背诵

Alfred the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Great</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">acted</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">his</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">own</font></b></span> spy<span><b><font color="#0000FF">, </font></b></span>visiting Danish <span><b><font color="#0000FF">camps disguised</font></b></span> as a minstrel. <span><b><font color="#0000FF">In</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">those days</font></b></span> wandering minstrels <span><b><font color="#0000FF">were</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">welcome</font></b></span> everywhere. They <span><b><font color="#0000FF">were</font></b></span> not <span><b><font color="#0000FF">fighting</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">men, </font></b></span>and their <span><b><font color="#0000FF">harp</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">was</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">their passport</font></b></span>. Alfred had learned <span><b><font color="#0000FF">many</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">of</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">their</font></b></span> ballads <span><b><font color="#0000FF">in</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">his</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">youth, and</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">could</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">vary</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">his</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">programme</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">with</font></b></span> acrobatic <span><b><font color="#0000FF">tricks</font></b></span> and<span><b><font color="#0000FF"> simple</font></b></span> conjuring<span><b><font color="#0000FF">.<br /> While</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Alfred's</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">little</font></b></span> army <span><b><font color="#0000FF">slowly</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">began</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">to</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">gather</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">at</font></b></span> Athelney, the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">king</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">himself</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">set</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">out to penetrate</font></b></span> the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">camp</font></b></span> of Guthrum, the commander of the Danish invaders. <span><b><font color="#0000FF">There</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">had</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">settled</font></b></span> down for the winter <span><b><font color="#0000FF">at</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Chippenham: thither</font></b></span> Alfred <span><b><font color="#0000FF">went</font></b></span>. He <span><b><font color="#0000FF">noticed</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">at</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">once</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">that</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">discipline was</font></b></span> slack<span><b><font color="#0000FF">: the</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Danes</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">had</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">the</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">self-confidence</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">of</font></b></span> conquerors<span><b><font color="#0000FF">, and</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">their</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">security</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">precautions were casual</font></b></span>. They <span><b><font color="#0000FF">lived</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">well, on</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">the</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">proceeds</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">of</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">raids</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">on</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">neighboring</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">regions</font></b></span>. <span><b><font color="#0000FF">There</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">they</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">collected</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">women</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">as</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">well</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">as</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">food</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">and</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">drink, </font></b></span>and <span><b><font color="#0000FF">a</font></b></span> life<span><b><font color="#0000FF"> of ease had</font></b></span> made them <span><b><font color="#0000FF">soft.<br /> Alfred</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">stayed</font></b></span> in the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">camp</font></b></span> a week<span><b><font color="#0000FF"> before he</font></b></span> returned to Athelney. <span><b><font color="#0000FF">The</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">force</font></b></span> there <span><b><font color="#0000FF">assembled</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">was</font></b></span> trivial compared with the Danish <span><b><font color="#0000FF">horde</font></b></span>. <span><b><font color="#0000FF">But </font></b></span>Alfred <span><b><font color="#0000FF">had deduced</font></b></span> that the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Danes</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">were</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">no</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">longer fit</font></b></span> for prolonged <span><b><font color="#0000FF">battle: </font></b></span>and<span><b><font color="#0000FF"> that</font></b></span> their commissariat <span><b><font color="#0000FF">had</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">no</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">organization, but</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">depended</font></b></span> on <span><b><font color="#0000FF">irregular raids.<br /> </font></b></span>So<span><b><font color="#0000FF">, faced</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">with</font></b></span> the Danish <span><b><font color="#0000FF">advance</font></b></span>, Alfred <span><b><font color="#0000FF">did</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">not</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">risk</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">open</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">battle</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">but</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">harried</font></b></span> the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">enemy</font></b></span>. He <span><b><font color="#0000FF">was</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">constantly</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">on</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">the</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">move, drawing</font></b></span> the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Danes</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">after</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">him. His</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">patrols</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">halted</font></b></span> the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">raiding</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">parties: hunger</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">assailed</font></b></span> the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Danish army. Now</font></b></span> Alfred <span><b><font color="#0000FF">began</font></b></span> a<span><b><font color="#0000FF"> long</font></b></span> series of skirmishes<span><b><font color="#0000FF"> -- </font></b></span>and <span><b><font color="#0000FF">within</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">a</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">month</font></b></span> the <span><b><font color="#0000FF">Danes</font></b></span> had surrendered. <span><b><font color="#0000FF">The</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">episode</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">could</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">reasonably</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">serve</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">as</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">a</font></b></span> <span><b><font color="#0000FF">unique</font></b></span> epic of royal espionage<span><b><font color="#0000FF">!</font></b></span>